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    dots Submission Name: Ah Musedots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1551/457/118
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       If you wonder about the caps being where they are it's because I utilized some copied hypertext links on some words or phrases which you will have to view on my blog to appreciate. Fortunately ES provides such a link on my page for those so inclined. Thanks again, Laura.


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    dotsAh Musedots
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    Might we have some Sympathy for dial-up Synchronicity
    some friendly cognoscente to avail
    our needs develop faster in Perception of disaster
    but could a witch or Wizard save my tale

    Would someone please like Alice condescend to fill my chalice
    that the gates unto high fantasy unfold
    and can my nymph portend that which a Disney might transcend
    to reach a new dimension never told

    Your face seen in the misty light and laugh that floats on summer night
    the dream of which I cannot quite recall
    ever moving under skies yet never seen by waking eyes
    invest in me some pieces of The All




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      Divine intervention, or a demonic deal these are the two
    standard ways to acquire real talent and inspiration.
    Divine intervention and the bestowing of gifts?
    Well good luck with that one I have no clue how to motivate our lord I pray all the time. However most of
    Gods miracles are used or so I believe in protecting me from all the crazy drivers on the highway. I am not kidding I push life's envelope everyday.

    That leaves a demonic deal easy to get if you are will to sacrifice. However I am sure you understand the devil is in the details.

    I wish u luck. Real muses are fickle and fairly rare
    you may be waiting a long time.
    | Posted on 2012-10-06 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      Consider this Lloyd, in the beginning, before there was anything that mattered everything that would ever be existed, it was the essence of totality, it was without dimensional constriction or necessitated form. As it continued it became according to its innate inflections as a functionally integrable form. The questionably understandable nature of its conjunction was an omnipotent directive beyond necessitated action or morphological construction. As the relative complexity of itís interrelations evolved dimensional consistence was born . Humanly understandable laws of physical integration governed many facets of itís conjunction yet the totality of itís ramification was beyond humanly realistic conjecture . But who needs realistic conjecture? Imaginations immaturity is a phantasmagoria of possible fantastications whose relative realism is insured by their very existence, optimistically speaking of course. I say have yourself a fabulist facade fantasia or maybe even a mirador bartizan panorama tableau. I've heard they can be good for the soul!! Dream on my fellow lyricist.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-06-10 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      "go ask Alice, I think she'll know"

    we need to find some new dimension that works...the old one is waylaid a long time ago...and what we have now, suffers greatly.

    i like the references to Alice, to Disney...and that title.."Ah Musing"---

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      The last line is the best...
    after all, imagination is divine.
    | Posted on 2012-06-09 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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