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The Illusionist

Author: Black Angel
ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
Elite Ratio:    2 - 16 /96 /96
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The Illusionist

A top hat and a cane
A trickster’s smile dancing upon his lips.
Black magic up his sleeve
Doves in a handkerchief.
The stage light comes to life
And curious eyes fall silent.
Smoke and lights appease the mind
Oo’s and Aa’s fill the room
Never noticing the slight slip of a hand
An extra card hidden in his collar.
A deep bow and a curtain close
He walks away with the same smile.
For it was time to trick the next flock of conscience
With their own foolishness.

Submitted on 2012-06-09 18:17:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  stag light? Is that "stage" light or did I miss something? Nice personality built here.
| Posted on 2012-06-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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