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    dots Submission Name: The Illusionist dots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 16/96/96
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Illusionist dots
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    A top hat and a cane
    A trickster’s smile dancing upon his lips.
    Black magic up his sleeve
    Doves in a handkerchief.
    The stage light comes to life
    And curious eyes fall silent.
    Smoke and lights appease the mind
    Oo’s and Aa’s fill the room
    Never noticing the slight slip of a hand
    An extra card hidden in his collar.
    A deep bow and a curtain close
    He walks away with the same smile.
    For it was time to trick the next flock of conscience
    With their own foolishness.




    Submitted on 2012-06-09 18:17:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      stag light? Is that "stage" light or did I miss something? Nice personality built here.
    | Posted on 2012-06-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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