Your World of Color

Author: Black Angel ASL Info:    22/F/Tx Elite Ratio:    2 - 16 /96 /96 Words: 110

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Your World of Color

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There’s a story of a place Three heel clicks away And I like to believe This is where you are With color swirling around your head And playful laughter filling your ears A world of your own to forever live in No sadness here can penetrate your heart Joy is forever abundant In this place of rainbows And I hope you are there For I like to think you are happy now Amongst the colors so dear to you One day I will join you Hand in hand we will live Surrounded by your rainbows Never to part again -Dedicated to Meagan

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