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    dots Submission Name: Your World of Colordots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 16/96/96
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsYour World of Colordots
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    There’s a story of a place
    Three heel clicks away
    And I like to believe
    This is where you are

    With color swirling around your head
    And playful laughter filling your ears
    A world of your own to forever live in

    No sadness here can penetrate your heart
    Joy is forever abundant
    In this place of rainbows

    And I hope you are there
    For I like to think you are happy now
    Amongst the colors so dear to you

    One day I will join you
    Hand in hand we will live
    Surrounded by your rainbows
    Never to part again

    -Dedicated to Meagan




    Submitted on 2012-06-13 03:12:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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