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    dots Submission Name: Look Into Perfectiondots
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    Author: Silima
    ASL Info:    21/F/Missouri, US
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 1/5/7
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Please don't rudely comment. It was just a few thoughts from when I was much younger.


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    dotsLook Into Perfectiondots
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    If we are truly God's children,
    Truly made in the image of God,
    Then we would be perfect,
    We would know right from wrong,
    But we alas don't know,
    We aren't perfect,
    We make mistakes just like everyone else,
    Perfection would equal normality,
    With perfection not able to be reached by humanity,
    We can't be deemed normal...

    Everyone has their flaws,
    No one is perfect.




    Submitted on 2012-06-13 03:15:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's because we have freedom of choice and believe it or not most people choose to be selfish. That's why the worlds wrong not enough love for other people even people who you wouldn't deem lovable. Only way to fix this planet and get off this rock into oneness is love no matter what others do, they will get off too just slowly. Great Write good to see other thinking this way.



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    | Posted on 2012-06-13 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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