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    dots Submission Name: these daysdots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       These days i wait to get fired by an ungrateful, corporate hypocrite. He stands for great customer service,yet, he disclosed to me he despises people.


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    These days have the sun which followed me
    Since my youth
    Not sure if to mock me or guide ?
    Sometimes it's hard to detect a friend from foe
    Understand how you can look at me this way

    He came in an army brat with a trip of power
    Without regard or courtesy
    Unscrupulous without a true,kind heart

    His eyes squint with distrust,all ambition,
    nothing too impressive
    Jellyfish type of wienie headed up a corporate
    Chutes & ladder

    No harm wished for my newest boss
    Liar am I. only in my head.
    My God is wrathful & a genuis at revenge.
    This crow doesn't have an honorable principle
    To stand on
    These days feelings are uncertain
    Watch me walk with the sun protecting my humility.
    Watch me stick it to the man.
    Yes, sun watch me these days.
    The sun is red like my shame.




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