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    dots Submission Name: Dragondots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1564/458/118
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Release your inner dragon!


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    dotsDragondots
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    summoned from shadow
    listen to your dragon's breath
    and soar on its wings




    Submitted on 2012-06-14 12:43:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Out of the darkening deep we summon our fire breathing beast in hopes of gleaning some truths from his blazing light and perhaps a ride to the clouds. excellent metaphor Lloyd.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-07-23 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Dragon so fiery like passion. We all have it. A lot of us are afraid to let it out, hence this igniting fire just keeps on burning us from within until it dies out. The more times we let it die out, the more burns we have inside of us instead of lighting the night with our light or creating warmth for the outer word.
    | Posted on 2012-09-22 00:00:00 | by wordsofmind | [ Reply to This ]
      Clouds are spitting fire,
    a hailstone storm is coming -
    watch out, it is me!

    | Posted on 2012-07-03 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this, even though it is short it seems full of meaning.

    Maddie
    | Posted on 2012-06-29 00:00:00 | by madsmurph99 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes. There is so much strength here. Sometimes I feel that deep within and sometimes it bursts forth. The problem is having an aim for the fire. A thing to want to shoot for. Whether to burn it down or light it up with energy. There needs to be a focus. I feel focus-less right now. Hoping it will come soon. Some sense of where this is all to lead now. Me and mine and our lives drifting . . . it's okay to ride the waves for awhile I suppose. But I need to harness that power and energy into something that means something beyond the dailiness of living.

    All this is to say, nice write. Obviously it is a good jumping off point for pondering other issues!

    Jane
    | Posted on 2012-06-19 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      consider dragon
    scaly strength, magic heart, fire
    ancient myth in flight
    | Posted on 2012-06-14 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      we are all more powerful than we think...the inner demon released, could maybe not be a demon at all...but the strength of us.

    the "its" doesn't want the apostrophe..

    but the inner dragon wants it said...

    and you said it so nicely in three short lines.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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