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    dots Submission Name: Call Off The Sniperdots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 211/290/189
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       A strange response to an even stranger comment made on a social networking site..


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    dotsCall Off The Sniperdots
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    Darlin'~
    Those cross-hairs burn the back of my head;
    Like liquid cyanide slipping down my throat.
    Quit setting your sights on me.
    My heart is too heavy for you to tote.
    Bite your own bullet baby;
    It's been waiting for a love like you..




    Submitted on 2012-06-14 23:00:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i found this rather interesting until the last line really threw me off.

    i have too much baggage, don't try to fly me on your plane, i will weigh you down...just play with your instruments until you get to where you need to go...you are better off without me along...

    i appreciate your wanting me...but set your sights on someone else.

    again...nice metaphor..just awkward at the end for me.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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