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    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    she made a new friend one day it was a magpie

    they sat together in her room without a view

    she gave the magpie one of her eyeballs

    it's ok i had an extra one anyway she said

    its delicious said the magpie

    thank you

    they watched the ghost cat sleeping and purring in its favourite broken box

    she watched with one eye but it was still sweet

    so cute ha ha ha they said

    they read some poetry and smelled something burning

    oh no it is the town burning down

    but it is ok we are safe here for now

    in my cabin on the fringe of the world

    she said

    who taught you to write a haiku? said her new friend the magpie and she said nobody i learnt it from the internet why don't you try it too some day

    so magpie collected some words from the ground that were lying there after the library burnt down and wrote,

    little broken things
    lying deep in your pocket
    for another day

    she lost them all in time but new versions came out so that was ok

    nevermind

    i would tell you a better bedtime story

    but i am not good with kids


















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      this is so Twilight Zone...love the mood...

    the sharing, the idea of saving for another day...

    and i like the thought.."i am not good at bedtime stories"

    tell a morbid tale because that is all we know...

    i only need one...so here is my other eye---

    my eye enjoyed this piece of writing...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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