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    dots Submission Name: girl of my desiredots
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    Author: vencix
    ASL Info:    19/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 19/88/66
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       a couple of friends inspired this poem with how much they love each other baki and rayna love you two


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    dotsgirl of my desiredots
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    your that girl that i desire its more the love it's ecstasy feeling them both at the same time it's you that i desire the most to cuddle to close next to a fire watching the flames burn like the love for you in my heart. the cold moons pale light dosen't light up night like that fire my one true ecstasy and desire.




    Submitted on 2012-06-16 15:16:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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