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    dots Submission Name: The Brass Ringdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1084/406/116
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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    Bytes: 707



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       social contiguity, the blond in entropy catalyst


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    dotsThe Brass Ringdots
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    Knowing makes me wonder
    At evocative truths which abound
    Salient sentience is a crucible
    Where the enlightened meet
    To sip ambrosia's elixirs
    Enrapturing mesmeric enchantments
    Fecund grace ensues
    Pervasions depths seem within reach
    With treatises we expound
    Lecherous libido's pandemic liaisons
    A chorus so unique
    Each one a sentinel equation
    In harmony replete
    The decadent arrogant squirm
    As rubato's flair reveals
    All the things that might have been
    The love that they concealed
    As they reach with grasping greedy hands
    For things they can not steal




    Submitted on 2012-06-16 19:55:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First I love the alliteration, the rest I just don't know what to say I really enjoyed this post. As always.
    | Posted on 2015-03-12 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      This had me thinking of a buch of professors sitting around espousing theories in obfuscated manner. Its the arrogance of knowledge with the jealousy of it not being ones idea.

    Hmmm Maybe not so different from writers who pontificate, and scribble then polish and read others for self- comparison. Then their envious that they didn't think to write what they just read.

    Lovely thing about knowledge, it can never truly be stolen but it can always be shared.
    | Posted on 2015-01-24 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      This had me thinking of a buch of professors sitting around espousing theories in obfuscated manner. Its the arrogance of knowledge with the jealousy of it not being ones idea.

    Hmmm Maybe not so different from writers who pontificate, and scribble then polish and read others for self- comparison. Then their envious that they didn't think to write what they just read.

    Lovely thing about knowledge, it can never truly be stolen but it can always be shared.
    | Posted on 2015-01-24 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Thankyou for the suggestion, I can see where you were going with this. My favorite stanz:
    All the things that might have been
    The love that they concealed
    As they reach with grasping greedy hands
    For things they can not steal
    I can definitely relate to this. As you can clearly see.





    | Posted on 2013-06-25 00:00:00 | by Darkwarrior | [ Reply to This ]
      Information is reality this is
    more fundamental than quarks.
    One cannot exist without being
    observed.
    We cannot observe ourselves even
    though we seem to think we think.
    Therefore in order to actually be?
    Someone beyond here has to
    be watching form over there.
    This appears from my here
    perspective to be
    part of the Quantum.
    Things that are measured become
    fixed. If nobody measures you
    are you broken. Or just floating
    around not realizing your potential.
    I admit it I stole the brass ring
    this is why my fingers are green.
    I am happy because I like green
    fingers.
    | Posted on 2012-09-22 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanks for yet another sip.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-06-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      but you owe me, you owe me
    don't you realize without a co-opted philosophy
    my babbling won't appear wise?

    you instructors, instruct us
    from the dust up to heaven, but grade on a curve
    please, this loaf without leaven

    if we fall, if we fail
    then you're a poor sort of savior
    you should have worked harder to earn us our favors


    Just some odd thoughts concerning your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2012-06-16 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      you can't buy truth and knowledge or love...you can only strive to get it by learning...

    the young people i know today from teaching, unfortunately ...not enough really thirst..they just exist with limited understanding, and that seems enough for them.

    but yes, something you cannot steal...you can't make deals to get it...you have to earn it.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      rubato...

    an awesome new word for me to learn. Thank you for that.

    Your first line is a kicker. Its a great thing to have knowledge, yet still find wonder in the world...

    and I like the greedy grasping for stolen time.
    You can grab all you want...
    but, once time has passed,
    its gone.
    Too true.

    I'm glad to read a new submission from you, Bruce!
    (even more glad to have needed only one trip to the dictionary...
    )
    | Posted on 2012-06-16 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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