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    dots Submission Name: Fade Awaydots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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    dotsFade Awaydots
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    I ache to fade away in the background of this crowd
    For which i go unseen for the most part anyhow
    I wish for an invisible cloak inwhich will grant me my deepest desire
    For all I am is an unwanted, unloved, empty person

    An empty shell of a person
    Thriving, breathing, living in darkness of pure and utter hate
    Hate for herself and those whom have wronged her in ways no one will ever comprehend

    Left behind in the aftermath of my dyfuctional childhood
    I, and only I reap from the disadvantages of a solid life
    Left with night terrors only the devil himself would concoct
    Only I, know the feelings of never having control over this life

    This inferno of hatred only grows
    This great distain I carry with me daily, gets heavier
    The shame I feel for the abuse I endured only deepens with every passing moment

    Full of hatred I am.
    Nothing more,
    Nothing less,
    I ache to just fade away in the background of this empty life I lead...




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