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    dots Submission Name: Silent Onedots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 312
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSilent Onedots
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    Oh Lord the world has slipped in between us again,
    I try to heave it away
    But tis your hand that moves
    Me closer to you
    Not mine.
    And your hand seems to be not moving me today.

    My heart is calling to you, my Love.
    Will you not answer?
    Oh silent Love
    Do not close your lips to me forever.

    Okay; be silent then.
    I shall not fight it.

    I will rest my ear against your quiet.
    I will sing of my love for you.
    I will marvel at the works of your hand.
    I will praise and glorify you.
    I will thank you with grateful sighing
    And lie down hungry , in wait. I will be filled.
    I will be like a faithful dog
    I will sit parched;
    I will be quenched.
    Did you think I would skulk away?
    I nearly did.

    Were my love in a coma unable to speak
    Would I turn and leave?
    I would not!
    Does love end when the mouth of the lover closes its final time?
    When the last exhale is embraced by the air
    Of a room thick with ebony emotions?
    I think not!

    I wipe the spittle from your mouth
    When your own fingers falter.
    I bend and bring the bluebells
    Gathering the garden to you
    When you are bed bound.
    I bathe you and tenderly brush your hair
    When your limbs lie limp, unable to do.

    Oh that I would see you everywhere.
    Oh that I would tend to you in everything.
    Oh that I would love you as everyone.

    Walking through a head of tendrils green today
    I stopped to smell the daisies.
    You are so beautiful.

    You are the Gardener
    And we the garden.
    And now you are the Garden
    And we the gardeners.

    How poorly we tend.




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      Yes indeed, silence can surely speak and say more than words can ever do ......sometimes.

    Frank
    | Posted on 2015-06-28 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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