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    Author: isabella
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    if charlie were here, i'd wear fuck-me boots, little else, with scotch in hand. and every now and then, i'd twirl my glass, just to hear ice swirl; find my heart again. i'd tell him about the time i gave my man head; the whole ride down route 95. how i did it for a living before my man and i met, before breathing was good, and skies were true. we are all sinners. aren't we charlie?

    i killed a wasp on tuesday.

    i can't tell you how much that hurt because i tried, i really tried to whisper her outside. she wouldn't listen though so i beat her with words. (some silly advert about children's clothes, all rolled up, like i was gonna hit a dog). (funny, that). i call her she; because she seemed like a she. female. looking for a place to burrow. God forgives you, my friend said.

    but i killed a wasp. ya know?





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      Some write poetry some work at
    writing poetry and some it seems
    have a poetic soul and no matter
    what they write? Well
    it just is poetry.

    The negative karma
    incurred by murdering that wasp?
    That is a pretty steep cliff I tell ya.

    You just have to do something
    to balance this egregious offense
    against nature. Which I am sure you
    have done by now. In fact you, having
    a poetic soul and all, already know
    this.

    I like to meander about your pages
    and pretend I am spying on you.
    The voyeuristic thrill of watching
    a poet create I find to be well like I
    said a thrill.

    This intimate relationship of reader
    peeking in on author is one of the
    best things about the internet.
    If only you have a webcam
    Then I could literally see you
    create.

    Hey I would pay!
    Well got to go now it was real
    really.
    | Posted on 2012-09-08 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      ....
    | Posted on 2012-06-20 00:00:00 | by slingerofink | [ Reply to This ]


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