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    Author: isabella
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 803/905/472
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Perhaps I have come full circle.

    I can four-finger-thumb an O, but my K's are still shaky.

    Three fingers don't seem enough these days as I learn to sign.
    They are heavy. Pen-laden. Weary. I thought exercise was good: More muscle; strong-like-bull.

    These hands! Look at them: they have lived. They have toasted;
    not toasted and toasted again.

    They have scattered ashes, made bread, made war; held beauty and shit and deep dark loam; buried seeds and killed flowers in equal measure.

    These hands have loved you with every ounce of their being.

    You should look at them.

    But I know you won't.

    And that is big-O shaky-K
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    Rather ordinary they are. Yet soulful just the same.


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