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    dots Submission Name: The Onedots

    Author: johnbegone92
    Elite Ratio:    5.41 - 11/3/3
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Onedots

    As soon as I met her, I knew she was the one.
    A childish, mental list in my head begun.
    Wed get to know each other, Id take her out on dates.
    Id dress up and Ill make sure that I was never late.
    Id make her laugh, see that gorgeous smile,
    Id tell her I never felt this way about anyone in a while.
    Wed dance until dawn to our favorite song.
    Wed lie next to each other all night long.
    Id hold her hand and kiss her, if shed let me,
    Then maybe, just maybe, shed finally see.
    That were meant for each other, wed never part.
    Now all I has to do is get rid of the other man
    Thats captured her heart.

    Submitted on 2012-06-21 11:07:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol its so cute till its kinda twisted at the end, typical john! aha nice but if youre giving it to someone, cut that last part
    | Posted on 2012-06-21 00:00:00 | by simpleandgreen | [ Reply to This ]

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