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    dots Submission Name: dog-likedots
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    Author: joeyalphabet
    ASL Info:    50/not likely/somewhere..
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 2212/2241/475
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsdog-likedots
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    this playfulness is really the
    faded instincts of the wolf, dormant
    through domestication long ages ago
    when tempted with theoretically free meat

    but the wolf will still come out
    if eye is permitted to gleam, if
    leash released to offer a chance to hunt
    or when they long to howl at the moon

    even humans follow the alpha of their pack
    a more societally sophisticated version of
    lying on the back to submit and
    licking the faces of our betters

    our patterns
    not so different from wolf or dog




    Submitted on 2012-06-22 14:51:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      subserviance again...this time as in the wolf or dog...who submits to the human...

    humans submitting to each other...rolling over, playing dead, sitting up...being stroked...

    we all want that attention..we all seem to want to please...

    to be accepted, embraced---to most importantly please our family, our significant other...

    nice analogy here.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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