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A Higher Place


Author: Black Angel
ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
Elite Ratio:    2 - 16 /96 /96
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A Higher Place


This is how it shall always end
My purpose has been fulfilled
And they move on
I shall be nothing more than the stepping stool
To help everyone reach their higher place
Yet I remain here
Alone until the next wondering soul finds me
Perhaps this one will help me up
But probably not




Submitted on 2012-06-24 01:33:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is nice

in this line:

'Alone until the next wondering soul finds me'

-- i think you should change wondering to wandering..this makes more sense to me
| Posted on 2012-08-29 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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