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    dots Submission Name: A Higher Placedots
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    Author: Black Angel
    ASL Info:    22/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 16/96/96
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Higher Placedots
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    This is how it shall always end
    My purpose has been fulfilled
    And they move on
    I shall be nothing more than the stepping stool
    To help everyone reach their higher place
    Yet I remain here
    Alone until the next wondering soul finds me
    Perhaps this one will help me up
    But probably not




    Submitted on 2012-06-24 01:33:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is nice

    in this line:

    'Alone until the next wondering soul finds me'

    -- i think you should change wondering to wandering..this makes more sense to me
    | Posted on 2012-08-29 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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