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    dots Submission Name: almostdots
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    Author: dismentled
    ASL Info:    26/M/"South of Heaven"
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 625/583/217
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsalmostdots
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    I almost lived
    I almost was
    running too long
    soul's collecting dust

    what should've been
    never is
    and
    what should've been
    never shall be

    Was i saved for nothing
    or is there nothing left
    worth trying for
    i gave my all
    and took even more
    yet still was lacking

    my dreams now fading
    consumed, like the soul
    i only wish i had
    nostalgia the only thing
    I can look forward to
    cause i've fought too long
    and forgotten the truth




    Submitted on 2012-06-27 07:50:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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