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    Author: MonsterMonster
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 6/11/12
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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    What is Poetry?
    Is it words,
    rhyming,
    in stanzas?
    Is it big words,
    reflecting intellect,
    in a format with no specific
    rhythm?
    Poetry is feeling.
    It's lying in bed,
    with the love of your life,
    listening to him or her
    breathe steadily.
    It's inner monologue
    about life,
    the inhabitants,
    and interactions.
    It's the "I love you"
    spilling from the lips
    of a lover,
    Your lover.
    It's your children saying,
    "Mommy."
    or
    "Daddy."
    Poetry is perspective of artists,
    The experts in word forming
    and truth.
    Poetry is you and me.




    Submitted on 2012-06-27 14:45:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm typically not a fan of this kind of poetry, but it's really nice. My only problem is that it sounds somewhat like some of the poetry we read in 7th grade English-and I'd rather not be reminded of that. But overall, very nice and keep up the good work.

    ~Hoof xxx
    | Posted on 2012-06-29 00:00:00 | by Hoofbeats | [ Reply to This ]
      i really do think that we are the poems...and the words write themselves...

    and poetry is pretty much anything that isn't prose...it is feeling, experience not information...

    it isn't meaning necessarily, but being.

    and a wish that more folks would stop and feel more understanding of life and each other.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-06-29 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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