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    dots Submission Name: Broken hearteddots
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    Author: madsmurph99
    ASL Info:    13/female/Parma,OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 17/9/17
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsBroken hearteddots
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    I trusted you with my heart and you broke it
    I tried so hard to get you to love me and failed
    I chased after you for so long, that when i finally got the courage to tell you how i felt, and got rejected, my heart split into a thousand peices,
    I tried mending it and glueing it back together, but it didn't work, It's funny how I can still love you with all thye little peices of my broken heart...</3




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