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    dots Submission Name: the secret evil of the dead dots
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    Author: joeyalphabet
    ASL Info:    50/not likely/somewhere..
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 2212/2241/475
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthe secret evil of the dead dots
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    the secret evil of the dead
    is how they insinuate themselves into your mind
    never leaving, never bringing joy, only sadness
    of memories never to be found again
    would it be such a tragedy if they left forever
    and we forgot them, would it be that we
    could finally know only joy without
    the sadness of remembering
    those pleasant and funny times we shared
    or is the pain we leave behind us
    the inevitable result of our mortality




    Submitted on 2012-07-01 10:11:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Fact is - Death is part of life ... of those who remain.

    But if life were only about pleasant moments, won't it be a bit heavenly?

    I know how painful it is lose someone really close. But it is their memories which should bring a smile, and not tears - after realizing the fact that they are gone. Instead, one should be happy one got to live those moments, even after realizing that they can't live those moments again.

    "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

    After someone is gone, it is those breath taking moments that we need to enjoy whenever they come across our mind :)

    Cheers,
    AbsolutelyLost
    | Posted on 2012-07-01 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]


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