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the secret evil of the dead


Author: joeyalphabet
ASL Info:    50/not likely/somewhere..
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Words: 82
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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the secret evil of the dead



the secret evil of the dead
is how they insinuate themselves into your mind
never leaving, never bringing joy, only sadness
of memories never to be found again
would it be such a tragedy if they left forever
and we forgot them, would it be that we
could finally know only joy without
the sadness of remembering
those pleasant and funny times we shared
or is the pain we leave behind us
the inevitable result of our mortality




Submitted on 2012-07-01 10:11:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Fact is - Death is part of life ... of those who remain.

But if life were only about pleasant moments, won't it be a bit heavenly?

I know how painful it is lose someone really close. But it is their memories which should bring a smile, and not tears - after realizing the fact that they are gone. Instead, one should be happy one got to live those moments, even after realizing that they can't live those moments again.

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

After someone is gone, it is those breath taking moments that we need to enjoy whenever they come across our mind :)

Cheers,
AbsolutelyLost
| Posted on 2012-07-01 00:00:00 | by AbsolutelyLost | [ Reply to This ]


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