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    dots Submission Name: When you hit rock bottomdots

    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhen you hit rock bottomdots

    In a state of complete desperation,
    When nothing comes to your mind,
    And you feel that this life is no good,
    That there is no meaning to your existence,


    There are things which you did, which you enjoyed,
    There are people whom you met, whom you were happy with,
    There are quests you accomplished, without helping hands,
    There are dreams you lived, with angelical minds.


    Never ever think that you can't do or accomplish what you wish to.

    Even if your deeds don't give you returns,
    Even if your friends say goodbye,
    Even if your quests fail, and
    Even if your dreams get shattered.

    Because you still have a will,
    And the will to fight and the flame to survive.

    Only if you let that will down and that flame perish,
    Will there be no hope and you will hit rock bottom.

    In that state, there is only one thing that will make you realize,
    The good and the bad in you,
    And that is experience.

    So when you do hit rock bottom,
    Visit places you normally do,
    Talk to people you normally do,
    Do things you normally do, and
    Dream like you normally do.

    Let them show if your life did have a meaning.

    I bet you the consequence will leave you thinking,
    And if not always, sometimes in positivity,
    And if in negativity, don't lose the will and the flame,
    For that is going to define your character for eternity.

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