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    dots Submission Name: stone cold rambledots
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    Author: isabella
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    dotsstone cold rambledots
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    i saved a spider today while doing dishes. made me think of
    nursery rhymes and how the rhythm of dreams stick with you.
    like oatmeal can, come sunday morning; thick with strawberries, blueberries, or occasional raisins (the un-cooked kind). anyway,
    he came out of nowhere, tried to climb a hundred times up a stainless steel sink, but just couldn't make it. he wasn't very ugly
    on a spider scale of 1 to 10, so i paper-toweled a bridge to him;
    let him go; onto party lights hanging, just outside my screen door.




    Submitted on 2012-07-05 09:15:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You are a true hero. Lately I let them go along their business of catching some of the fruit flies that are currently plaguing us. They have a job to do, plus if you notice, some of them have a lot of character.
    | Posted on 2012-07-09 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      "I wish I could perform some sort of miracle," said the shy little girl to the small brown spider.

    "Perhaps your gift," said the sage arachnid, "is making others aware that miracles exist."

    "Maybe you're right," said the buoyant young child as she waved and was blessed with eight waves in return.
    | Posted on 2012-07-05 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      i usually try to do the same thing...get them outside...it is the considerate thing to do...all life matters..

    nice little piece here, isabella.

    you write in a way that gets us there...quite a nice visual texture to your writing, whether prose or poetry.


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    | Posted on 2012-07-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2012-07-05 00:00:00 | by slingerofink | [ Reply to This ]


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