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    dots Submission Name: Stagnantdots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 974
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    dotsStagnantdots
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    We dance alone and walk the fire
    The soul is a lowly occupier
    who dresses like you and acts the part
    and leaves just as fleeting as the beating heart

    And I'm holding on and I'm standing, still
    And you're moving on and I'm standing, stagnant
    Waiting for the static to free me from sadness or leave me alone
    Praying her solipsistic consciousness dreamed me in madness a long time ago

    Your love is the fulcrum that never let me down
    I'm a culture of cells, coagulated
    from a cess pool of stagnated water

    I knew me a girl into alchemy
    She affixed her soul to machinery
    With blossom and bloom her Eden thrived
    One taste of her fruit and that day ye shall surely die

    And I'm holding on and I'm standing, still
    And you're moving on but I'm standing, stagnant
    Waiting for the static to free me from sadness or leave me alone
    Praying her solipsistic consciousness dreamed me in madness a long time ago

    Your love is the fulcrum that never let me down
    I'm a culture of cells, coagulated
    from a cess pool of stagnated water




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