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    dots Submission Name: Moments overdots
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    Author: Joybell
    ASL Info:    22/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 101/94/56
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMoments overdots
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    Lying next you at night, the demons in my mind start to fight.
    Snuggle closer; snuggle closer, until the moment is over.

    These memories ever free, trying to trap me in the past, your arms tighten around me- at last.

    Sing me a little song until they’re gone,
    Snuggle closer, snuggle closer until the moment is over

    Here we are, in the dream we dreamed, you won’t be letting anything get to me.

    Thank you for loving me with my scars, never fearing what they are.

    Stroking your chest, as they fade away, knowing you are the best, forget the rest.
    Snuggle closer, snuggle closer
    Moments over.





    Submitted on 2012-07-06 15:37:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      we keep playing those moments over and over in our head...the bad ones from the past but also the times when we have had understanding from a significant other who understands the scars and helps to heal them.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-07-06 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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