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    dots Submission Name: set me freedots
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    Author: Midnight_Toker
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 13/232/500
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsset me freedots
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    Swear to me
    tear through me,
    speak to me
    reach for me,
    see through me....
    is my heart visible through the thick forlorning fog?
    believe me when I give reason
    and try to describe cause,
    PLEASE....
    swear to me,
    tear through me
    and find my core,
    before i'm forever lost
    and my heart is no more,
    it's fading, falling, cascading and dissolving into nothingness,
    but I must confess...
    i'm less than what reflects from this physical,visible body of flesh which you see
    for what lies beneath is me,
    I beg you,
    somehow
    someway...
    set me free




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