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    dots Submission Name: Power Shiftdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Why do the poor seem to put
    All of their priorities on halt?
    Not knowing that the millions
    The rich spend, is like plucking
    A hair off their scalp.

    I've witnessed starving kids
    Way too many,
    While politicians with their lies
    Manage to fill their kid's bellies.

    And if everything
    Was lost like Atlantis,
    Then society is
    Devouring the youth
    Like a preying mantis.

    Power shift seems to
    Have me puzzled,
    Just like the idea that
    Your suffering and mine,
    Are a product of
    Different struggles.




    Submitted on 2012-07-08 11:37:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like your take on this....

    I don't like most politicians, and liken their lot to clever thieves who have figured out how to steal without going to prison for it....
    | Posted on 2012-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You have brought forth a very good topic on the unequal distribution of wealth and resources in this world. Poor are tormented and the rich flourish. This is the ultimate truth of this world.
    | Posted on 2012-07-08 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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