The dead still speak through
The winds, the sun, morning dew
Still speak to our hearts
| I like it. Don't know about the last line though. I think you could have done better there...||| Posted on 2012-07-13 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ] || what a lovely haiku...well done...nice theme put in to the nature guise...|
i love the brevity of haiku...yet how much is contained in so few lines...
and i really do think that they speak to us...in many ways..especially the three you mention in this poem.
|| Posted on 2012-07-11 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ] |