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    Author: joeyalphabet
    ASL Info:    50/not likely/somewhere..
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 2212/2241/475
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    Petition for Intercession to the Ghost of General Washington

    I pray thee, General, Saint of America, intercede for our country
    still so tender yet so indebted to your glory, so debated
    and divided in this Lowly Estate we find ourselves

    I pray thee, General, pray for us, petition for our Common Good
    to let Us thrive once more, to emerge strong from this turning
    point, to give us the Bravery to destroy our enemy ourselves

    I pray thee, General, let us no more battle amongst ourselves in
    Civil War, lest we rend asunder this fragile Alliance, this fragile
    patriotism, lest we unravel his slender Common thread


    Let us live again in this Union so keenly imperfect as though
    perfection Reigned, let us know this Country we knew remains
    let us die in the assurance we will remain in Greatness




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      wow, write on!

    where is the country we once fought to save...what has happened to us?

    if only we could bring it back...if Washington saw us now...i wonder if he would even want to fight...he would probably go chop down some more cherry trees.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-07-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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