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    dots Submission Name: So Freedots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       inspired by the awakening


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    dotsSo Freedots
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    She twisted that indestructable, gold band around her
    Sacred finger, slipping it on and off, gazing at the majestic
    Ocean, so clean, so pure, so free.
    She wondered how much more of this
    She could take. Every second since she was conceived
    The people she once admired drill expectation
    She was senseless too. Her brain was beautiful,
    A slab of untouched gleaming marble until the
    Others came with their mallets and violently pounded
    Out what they wanted to see.
    Baffled at how someone cageless could
    Feel so trapped, she plunged into the liquid crystal
    And splashed childishly, beginning to swim
    Away from the life less land, her past youth.
    She swam farther and farther, laughing hysterically
    As for the first time, she felt unchained and light.
    When her apendages began begging for mercy she
    Succumbed to the grasp of the water
    She graciously lnvited it into her mouth, nose, and lungs
    She smiled as she sank lower and lower,
    Filling herself, becoming once again
    So clean, so pure,
    So free.




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