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    dots Submission Name: OUR NIGERIAdots

    Author: kingsley
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 100/59/46
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsOUR NIGERIAdots


    If we believe ;
    Our Nigeria will be more than just a name.
    It will become a golden tree from whose branches we will grow,
    revealing true beauty to the rest of the world;
    who can only stop to admire.

    If we agree;
    Our Nigeria will be more than just a place.
    It will become a symbol of the lasting peace attainable,
    When virtues are allowed to operate freely;
    In the midst of diverse opinions.

    If we persist;
    Our Nigeria will be more that just a nation.
    It will become a positive consciousness emanating from mother Africa,
    For together we will surely achieve;
    Many more things than we all desire.

    Submitted on 2012-07-17 20:23:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I am more concerned for my anonymity than I am for the divinity of your evangelist, after all it was due yesterday. We can assimilate many things from the nature of social contiguity, communion with the pack, but it is pretty much beyond our abilities to produce cumulatively rational correlation, our conceptual abilities are somewhat thwarted by the unmitigatedly individual nature of our extraneous conclusiveness. However I can definitely relate the fidelity of your well, it makes a lot of sense on the depths of enigmatism's pervasion but doesn't seem to contend with the heights of sanity we entity. Maybe that's a little bit harsh, you did say "When virtues are allowed to operate freely", I just feel we are evolutionally incapable of cumulatively rational correlation and should address the nature of individual sanctity not social contiguity.

    | Posted on 2012-07-17 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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