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    dots Submission Name: Too Good.dots
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    Author: MonsterMonster
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 6/11/12
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       One of mine and Aaron's on-going conversations.


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    dotsToo Good.dots
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    He tells me he only has one fear.
    He says that he loses small amounts of sleep,
    every single night,
    because of this fear.
    Every night he checks his phone,
    at random hours,
    for one of "those" texts,
    the ones that tell him I'm gone.
    He has this fear
    that having me for himself
    is too good to be true
    and that one day
    I'll be gone.




    Submitted on 2012-07-19 07:05:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think everyone has this fear. He is not alone, at least there is that. But unfortunately, it will become true one day. Impermanence is a fact of life. Everything is always changing, people are always coming and going. The only being we can control on this earth is ourself.

    I liked this write. However, I didn't like the use of the word "texts," as I just felt it ruined the flow of the thought behind the poetry. For some reason, technology doesn't seem very poetic.
    | Posted on 2012-08-03 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]


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