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    dots Submission Name: Memories sharp as daggersdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsMemories sharp as daggersdots
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    Years cannot erase
    every tear I couldn't take
    Every moment once held.
    Every memory given up.
    Why should I have to give up
    On something that keeps me from falling apart?

    And yet, it all falls on silence.
    Drowned out by other's fears
    I have to be a super hero year after year
    But when will I get what I want?

    How many memories must I erase
    Before one finally gets it's place
    How many times must my heart be torn apart
    Before it finds it's safe heaven?

    No. The answer was always the same
    Year after year, break after break.
    The answer never changed.
    People never changed,
    they're all the same.

    How many tears fell from the sun?
    How many times did stars fall
    Never to be seen once more?
    How many times must I stare up
    And wonder what happened to the moon?

    No, the answer has always been the same.
    And maybe...I'm the one to blame.

    Because if I hadn't been so weak,
    The memories would have vanished.
    Years falling apart would have been forgotten.
    If I hadn't been so weak,
    my heart would be complete.

    But I'm not weak, see?
    My heart is as cold as be.
    It won't break, it won't crumble.
    I'll make people stumble.
    I'll tear them apart.
    Starting from the heart.

    I'm tired of breaking
    I'm tired of hating
    I'm tired of losing,
    I'm tired of breaking.

    This heart belongs to me.
    And no one else's will it be.




    Submitted on 2012-07-19 20:50:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Best of luck to you and thanks for sharing. ....

    (Wouldn't let me finish my paragraph. ..)
    | Posted on 2012-07-21 00:00:00 | by dannyshyboy | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! .. I've tried hard not to feel this way myself , I'm not sure if this is a personal experience for you, but I have felt thus way. .. kind of wanting to forget things from the past but as hard as you try you can't. .and when it's due to matters of the heart , you learn never to give your most important organ for anyone to do what they can with it. .... very, very deep. .... best luck to you a ndthanks fir
    | Posted on 2012-07-21 00:00:00 | by dannyshyboy | [ Reply to This ]


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