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    dots Submission Name: Noticedots
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    Author: Blue Monk
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    touch me
    cool and warm
    and blessed be
    the neither norm
    of blue and red
    of royalty

    Madonna one
    or Babalon
    She knows...

    of lessor fame
    is still the same




    Submitted on 2012-07-24 14:57:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "the neither norm"

    This is a rather subtle way of parting for consideration the two extreme internal characters which together facilitate the essence of, in this case a feminine being, which is to be found within the human individual.

    The poem suggests there is a bit of the Madonna and a bit of the Babalon, considered here as archetypes, which to be found in the makeup of the "normal" feminine psyche. These are correspondingly symbolized blue or red at those extremes, yet when combined in the person they form the "royal color" purple, AKA the "norm".

    Perhaps only the individual can "know" which of these two goddess archetypes might hold sway at any given time, hence, "She knows".

    "Of lessor fame" meaning the feminine human as opposed to either goddess. Not as "famous" as either yet as it happens bears both regardless.

    "is still the same" regards the feminine psyche as the totality of the two cited archetypes.
    | Posted on 2019-07-17 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      This makes my brain hurt!!
    The neither norm of colored royalty?
    Blue bloods bleeding red?
    Sociopathic royalty exploiting our mothers
    by turning them into prostitutes?
    However lesser fame is the same.
    Therefore the singer Madonna is caste
    on the same plane as the working girl
    next door in Gods eyes?

    Hey that is good!
    | Posted on 2012-09-29 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I didn't make much of reading this because it is the end of my session and I'm out of time. But I read some of your poems sometimes, and like them even when I don't understand some lines. It always seems to be a moment of time for an eternal experience, that you are feeling for?
    | Posted on 2012-07-29 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      the "neither norm" threw me too...

    but i sure like the rest of this...Mothers love their children, famous or not...we equally reserve a mother's heart, always.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-07-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      A sweet prayer to Great Mother...
    she's found anywhere and everywhere.

    I especially like the title, as if you're asking the reader to take note.




    It seems you worked faster than you thought you would. Nicely done!


    (But, what is "the neither norm"? I got a bit lost there.)
    | Posted on 2012-07-24 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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