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    dots Submission Name: End This...dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Rant/Longing
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    Take me from this hell I live,
    I beg of you,
    That tonight the torcher will end
    You will soon cease this wrath upon my frail body.

    Broken
    Beaten
    Battered shell of a human

    Darkness fills the emptiness I feel from within
    Tunneling through the channels of my heart
    Through the depths my soul
    Even through my narrow veins...

    Darkness lays all around me
    All throughout me

    Itís only a matter of time until this evil
    This hatred...
    Swallows me whole

    I plead with you!!!
    Make tonight that time?!?!
    End my endless suffering, end this miserable life, End the pain that never goes away..
    End my life!!

    It was never mine to begin with...




    Submitted on 2012-07-24 17:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      (torture) a torcher is someone who lights torches and or fires
    | Posted on 2012-09-01 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      I wish I could give, you the words, that would make it all go away. that, would take the pain and at the very least numb it.
    please do not, give,up.

    Heather
    | Posted on 2012-08-01 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]


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