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    dots Submission Name: un-titled titledots

    Author: isabella
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    dotsun-titled titledots

    (behind bed-green-eyes that slow song sings). think you.
    think me. think talks of bees; how they bumble, stumble,
    rumble through night. think of why threes and nines would think
    non-rhyme rhymes with: i wanna hold your hand, hum a tune
    twirl my hair. stay awhile. play awhile. miss a mile, or two
    or twenty. whisper a dream. tell a story. don't forget to call
    me glory. (in the morning).

    Submitted on 2012-07-25 07:29:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      just call me Angel of the morning, just touch my cheek before you leave me, baby...just call me Angel of the morning, Angel..then slowly turn away I won't beg you to stay....

    hum a tune, hum a tune...

    very cool, melodic write...I wanna hold your poem!
    | Posted on 2012-08-02 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2012-07-25 00:00:00 | by slingerofink | [ Reply to This ]

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