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    dots Submission Name: Hold *Date Unknown* CMPdots
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    Author: Soniathedrummer
    ASL Info:    17 Female, MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 0/2/32
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsHold *Date Unknown* CMPdots
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    I'm sorry,
    For my many flaws,
    I'm depressed,
    And empty inside,
    I'm sorry I'm hollow,
    And yes I do love you,
    But the sad thing is,
    It's gotten dark in my heart,
    I need someone to hold,
    Oh,
    How I wish that person was you,
    I hate the feeling,
    Leaving me lonely inside,
    I'm in the dark,
    And you don't get the clues...




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