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Author: janekostman09
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-Wait-I am a word within your time of fate
Some hate when I am around
But yet I am silent and make no sound
Each time you blink your eyes
Time with me just passes by
I am the feeling of those who have waited
With memories that vividly faded
I am not seen but because of me some scream
I am a small five letter word
People do not see me but yet I can be heard
In peoples actions I am seen
When they stand there just waiting
So what am I too you in your life?
Am I just a word of like or of hate and strife?

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