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    dots Submission Name: WAITdots
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    Author: janekostman09
    Elite Ratio:    1.55 - 96/54/44
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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    dotsWAITdots
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    -Wait-I am a word within your time of fate
    Some hate when I am around
    But yet I am silent and make no sound
    Each time you blink your eyes
    Time with me just passes by
    I am the feeling of those who have waited
    With memories that vividly faded
    I am not seen but because of me some scream
    I am a small five letter word
    People do not see me but yet I can be heard
    In peoples actions I am seen
    When they stand there just waiting
    So what am I too you in your life?
    Am I just a word of like or of hate and strife?




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