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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Steam rose from the bath...
    I sighed as each toe made waves on the fluid canvas
    Where my bewildered life would splash its uneasiness
    Into a step-in portrait of my motherhood.
    Some would call it courageous to be responsible for another human;
    I call it courageous to sit in the tub for more than 10 minutes.
    As my body heats and each body part
    has made all the whirls possible in a state of eventual ennui,
    I can no longer stand the boiling of my body
    into tender meat for the market I forgot about a long time ago
    when I met my son's father,
    so promising.
    I got out...
    the lavender and rosemary leaves and debris settled low along the edges
    like an abstracted Turkish coffee cup reading,
    Distinctly seeing my mysterious future as a forgotten queen.
    Nervous, I dried my limbs and thought about time,
    My raisin-tips reminded me of my body's wrinkles and what was left
    of playing with my boy.
    Hugs and soccer everywhere make ripe memory stamps
    To seal the love letter I will send on paper made of a family of fallen tress,
    Recycled.




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      You have great narrative skill; I can easily see you writing a successful novel..

    thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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