A Mother's Kiss by PopRocksRae

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Submission Name: A Mother's Kiss dots

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Author:	PopRocksRae
ASL Info:	21/ F/ Heaven
Elite Ratio:	2.49 - 232/369/355
Words:	125

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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A Mother's Kiss dots

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Growing up I noticed
My world was full of hurt
but I never stopped to think
and linger on the worse.

Because every time I fell
and my world came down like mist
my heart would be put together
and sealed with my mother's kiss.

Now that I am too a mother
I see my children cry.
it pains me to see their pain
and breaks something inside.

With all my knowledge& experience
I bend to what left of this.
I hold their hurt in my hand
and seal it with my kiss.

a mother is more than a woman
she has something that can't be missed
Each mother can take your pain away
and do it with a mother's kiss.

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  Yes I watch my wife with our children and there is something about a mothers kiss that makes everything better Nice Job and thanks for sharing
| Posted on 2012-08-14 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  I loved reading your poem and you captured what we hope most mothers are.

My favorite line : I hold their hurt in my hand
and seal it with my kiss.

I could feel the love in your words.. Thank you for sharing.. Desi
| Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
  Mothers are truly Angels on earth..
"Earth Angels"; their care and attention contributes so much to the development of the child, and from that, the entire world....

thanks for sharing this...it's great!!
| Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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