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    dots Submission Name: A Mother's Kissdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsA Mother's Kissdots
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    Growing up I noticed
    My world was full of hurt
    but I never stopped to think
    and linger on the worse.

    Because every time I fell
    and my world came down like mist
    my heart would be put together
    and sealed with my mother's kiss.

    Now that I am too a mother
    I see my children cry.
    it pains me to see their pain
    and breaks something inside.

    With all my knowledge& experience
    I bend to what left of this.
    I hold their hurt in my hand
    and seal it with my kiss.

    a mother is more than a woman
    she has something that can't be missed
    Each mother can take your pain away
    and do it with a mother's kiss.




    Submitted on 2012-07-29 20:16:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes I watch my wife with our children and there is something about a mothers kiss that makes everything better Nice Job and thanks for sharing
    | Posted on 2012-08-14 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved reading your poem and you captured what we hope most mothers are.

    My favorite line : I hold their hurt in my hand
    and seal it with my kiss.

    I could feel the love in your words.. Thank you for sharing.. Desi
    | Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      Mothers are truly Angels on earth..
    "Earth Angels"; their care and attention contributes so much to the development of the child, and from that, the entire world....

    thanks for sharing this...it's great!!
    | Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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