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    dots Submission Name: Enigmadots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Nature
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    dotsEnigmadots
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    blazing on day, twinkling at night
    shifting from moment to moment
    remnants alight,
    beauty to beauty




    Submitted on 2012-07-30 08:18:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      an enigma indeed! There is mystery and intrigue in your writing. Thanks for sharing this. I see a developing talent in your writing...
    | Posted on 2012-07-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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