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    dots Submission Name: What I am to my loverdots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsWhat I am to my loverdots
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    a shadow of another's perfection,
    a prisoner of comparisons
    a girl from a dame,
    love's old flame




    Submitted on 2012-07-31 06:35:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can relate to this, especially loved the second line. I hate being compared to others and it sucks because people do it all the time.
    I'm glad you have captured this idea.

    Jen
    | Posted on 2012-08-28 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      A short verse from you, but quite deep and profound.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2012-07-31 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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