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    dots Submission Name: 99 wordsdots
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    Author: AbsolutelyLost
    ASL Info:    27/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 54/41/33
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots99 wordsdots
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    What can you describe in 99 words? A good story, a good thought, a good song or may be just an abstract picture.

    Letís see.

    He: Do I know you?

    She: I suppose you are trying out an old trick?

    He: Now that I have your attention, do you mind going for a cup of coffee with me?

    She: Would you pay for the time and the coffee?

    He: Thank you. I think I can't afford that much.

    She: Well, you owe me 0.5 bucks.

    He: Why do I owe you 0.5 bucks?

    She: That's for these 35 seconds.




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