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The filthy Self


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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Words: 101
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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The filthy Self



Can you see your façade.
Can only see your image.
Can you see your internal alleys.
Can be seen.
Does not want to see.
So many behemoths and dragons residing there.
Image of an angel perceived in the eyes of our mind.
So many follies, contradictions and anomalies buried inside us.
Annihilation of self by the inner beasts.
Leads to our adversities and poignancy.
Living in duality.
Contemplating and pondering the two faced life.
Solution to our anguish and despair.
Way to perfection.
Way to permanent bliss.
Merging into perfection.
Transitioning into an impeccable world to achieve salvation.




Submitted on 2012-08-01 17:26:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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