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    dots Submission Name: The filthy Selfdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 269/107/54
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots The filthy Selfdots
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    Can you see your fašade.
    Can only see your image.
    Can you see your internal alleys.
    Can be seen.
    Does not want to see.
    So many behemoths and dragons residing there.
    Image of an angel perceived in the eyes of our mind.
    So many follies, contradictions and anomalies buried inside us.
    Annihilation of self by the inner beasts.
    Leads to our adversities and poignancy.
    Living in duality.
    Contemplating and pondering the two faced life.
    Solution to our anguish and despair.
    Way to perfection.
    Way to permanent bliss.
    Merging into perfection.
    Transitioning into an impeccable world to achieve salvation.




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