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    dots Submission Name: springdots
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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Mother Nature's intuition springs a little leaf from her fertile brown skin
    Courageously, it tickles the zesty air and so sways a fuzzy baby bee to its first flower
    Wobbling, it flies back home to Mama's stable wings, as she sits on her throne
    Waiting for her "honey", amused by this economic cycle

    Vivacious rebirth has arrived between the oceans
    The pale pink breeze shushes the commotion,
    And combs the earth's angel hair growing in the lowlands
    Where unicorns trot under the sky's soothing rainbows
    They nuzzle and then tap horns gently in cheers to the new year

    Now is the time les printemps turns eyes from blue to green
    Bare hearts avoid callousing with the hemisphere's emerging padding




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