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    dots Submission Name: Summer Serenitydots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsSummer Serenitydots
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    There’s something about windy trees,
    That appeases the soul, put minds at ease.
    There’s something about those summer blooms,
    That pleases the eyes, erasing the gloom.
    There’s something about the butterflies,
    That uncovers joy as they flutter by.
    There’s something about the singing birds,
    That keeps you calm and self-assured.
    There’s something about the glorious sun,
    That lets you know you’re life has just begun.




    Submitted on 2012-08-03 21:31:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is great!..it captures the beauty of life and nature..i just kept smiling while reading this..beautiful in its simplicity, relaxes the mind and body
    | Posted on 2012-08-29 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]
      like this one because it eases your mind while reading it...there's such serenity in it and makes you want to grab a coffee and stare at the world fondly..

    love it
    jen
    | Posted on 2012-08-25 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, this one is so simple but it makes me smile :)
    | Posted on 2012-08-04 00:00:00 | by johnbegone92 | [ Reply to This ]


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