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    dots Submission Name: Weightless Perfectiondots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    dotsWeightless Perfectiondots
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    The way he makes me feel, like a cloud, light and sweet
    Floating into the evening sky, above all the mundane
    Squabbles and pedestrian affairs. I drift through the night peacefully
    Among the stars and the beautiful moon, shining their light through
    My body as I soak up all its secret powers and lift higher and higher
    Counting. Cloud four. Cloud five. Cloud six. Seven. Eight.
    Ah, nine. Weightless perfection. I close my eyes and feel
    The breeze of midnight and the heat of the moment. Then
    As quick as I arose from the earth suddenly comes
    The time when the clock strikes, the rings and dings like lead
    Weights attached to my hips as Iím pulled back down on
    Solid ground. Back to reality. Ah well,
    Thereís always tomorrow.




    Submitted on 2012-08-03 21:45:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this one and the flow is really great. I don't see any flaws in it. I imagine myself daydreaming and puting my thoughts on paper which I haven't done for a while now.

    Good job
    Jen
    | Posted on 2012-08-26 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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