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    dots Submission Name: My esteem for poesydots
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    Author: irrelevantme
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 83/89/62
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy esteem for poesydots
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    A poem, with its words and metric rhymes,
    knows no bounds, no space, no time;
    a creation of pure beauty, an endless scene:
    all is possible in a poets dream

    images of life, of love, of grief;
    from a poets eye will manifest
    words to portray emotions and tricks
    may be long or short -- an art of write.




    Submitted on 2012-08-04 01:09:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poesy is such a cuddly word.
    A poem, with its words and metric rhymes,
    knows no bounds, no space, no time;
    a creation of pure beauty, an endless scene:
    all is possible in a poets dream

    I got lost for a bit caught up in a dream
    right after I read this lovely stanza.

    I was off on a journey to a far mountain land
    where a great ivory temple stands high
    shining with the reflected glory of risen
    sun. I was just about to step into a flower
    festooned courtyard when I remembered I
    was reviewing you!
    So, I rushed right back here and finished reading
    your Poesy. I am happy I did.
    However I cant help but wish you would
    put that camera down!! I want to see
    who is behind it.
    | Posted on 2012-09-15 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      What I like most of all I think is your punctuation: it conducts the reader to read in a nice flow, and I think it helps the rhyme work in the first stanza too..

    'all is possible in a poets dream'

    Nice line, I like the word dream in poetry and you use it well here. It is true also that all is possible

    'a creation of pure beauty'

    this line is a little lazy. It works but it isn't very original.


    Other than that, it was a nice, simple piece that describes poetry well, in all its power and variety. I'm glad I came across this and I think you have some potential
    | Posted on 2012-08-27 00:00:00 | by unknownguest | [ Reply to This ]


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