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    dots Submission Name: Thought Schooldots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThought Schooldots
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    Indoctrinated by the dead
    You go
    where you are led
    It is evolution of a kind
    This brain washing of your mind
    An edifice of rotted brick
    May still protect the thick
    of wit





    Submitted on 2012-08-04 17:30:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and so goes academia
    a high tech slackademia
    that falsely fosters thoughts unique
    then libels its renowned black sheep
    as if its brightest morphed like freaks
    | Posted on 2012-08-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      okay my thoughts...god, i liked this...i try to teach my college students to think outside the box and not take everything handed down to them and just regurgitate that...come up with something new...or at least figure out what to do with what we have...instead of just memorizing...like parrots..

    god, we are dumb animals sometimes...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-08-05 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      How can you slander the historians of our world so, or even those who would make statistical sense of our forefathers fruits. I lived here is very important to me, along with these things happened. I realize the enigma entity it doesn't animal amount to but there are things to be learned from the dead. Maybe your right I'm a little bit dense, but dim witted......hrumpf!!!

    Bruce

    PS: I loved the shotgun rider peeking out of one eye at the harrowing road ahead.
    | Posted on 2012-08-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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