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    dots Submission Name: Sad? Change the Smiledots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 41/64/78
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1013
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    Description:
       Couldn't really create my usual verses today so here is something different...


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    dotsSad? Change the Smiledots
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    Self-feeling
    space
    radical change
    whole consciousness
    perception
    is it?
    intertwined
    fallen away
    brisk fullness
    serendipity
    yearning desire
    calming rations
    upon death
    rung about signals
    leading precision
    connection
    play
    distance
    fall out
    courage
    filling ripples
    staging one desire
    full of antiquity
    reimbursement
    moving forth
    rationality
    crept up
    slowly words
    befall
    light glazing
    distraction
    regret malformed
    its fearful
    nourishment
    distance
    distance away
    the right way
    simply amazing

    Grip the feeling




    Submitted on 2012-08-05 01:37:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This gets to my graspy greedy up frugal. An interesting treatise on the mingy minions of the mind.
    | Posted on 2012-08-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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